28 September 2008

What should I do?












These are the spreads I brought in last week.
What do you guys think I should do to improve them?
Comments/suggestions greatly appreciated...!

1 comment:

adrian said...

these are all really great. i love how cohesive your typeface choices are. and i think is has a really great look. i think the only one that i would personally tweak would be the "potato canon" spread. "Potato Canon" looks a too big. its kinda competing with the images, but thats just my personal opinion. i really like all of them.